Post by Suta Onawa [Bleh.....] on Jun 15, 2013 21:00:28 GMT -5
Suta OnawaA DAY OF LABOR
Ms. Onawa was given a case to spy on one named Hakiu Okanowi, a man suspected to be a murderer of his own children. The age Ms. Onawa is only explains what she has seen. Her eyes have dark bags on her light pale skin. Her body is erect and torn from damage of being in the military. Her hair was at it's finest, still the dyed white color she was permitted from the beginning. But the reason for allowing her to have such a strange color for hair is because of her position in the military ranking.
In the morning, she grabs her regular cup of Chi Tea, takes one of the gardening magazines off of her bathroom toilet top, walks through the kitchen with nothing but a tang-top and undergarments and with her normal bed-head-hair, drinks the rest of her Chi Tea and puts the empty cup in the dishwasher, runs it, jumps onto her computer, and looks at the updates from the military community website. Every morning. Nothing changes every morning. Perhaps a change would be nice, maybe a surprise visit in her house by a young man, a wondering dog in the yard?
Now it was 6:30am and she needed to get dressed to go to work again. Her schedule was different today though. She was going in later than normal. Her average schedule would be around 3:00am to 5:00am and that was the beginning of her day of work. "I guess he's taking pity on me then.." She looks at the clock - she has at least 30 minutes to make it to Central Command of the building she works in. She puts on her khakis, dress shirt, and flat-heals and throws her sludge hammer into her red Sedan.
Finally at the building, she opens the car door and slams it shut; taking her sludge hammer that is now in her hands, and flinging it around her shoulder on it's strap. Ms. Onawa makes her way through the office building, to the check-in desk, signs in, and makes it to the Central Commands on time exactly. She greets everyone with a 'hey', a bow, a hand shake, or a high-five. Today seemed more relaxing, more perfect then normal. It was another day of work.
Word Count|378
Key:
- "I'm talking"
- I'm thinking
- I'm walking
Muse: Pretty good. 7/10
Notes: Finally got to the RP muse phase. Hopefully I'll keep it up. And hopefully this "perfect day" will turn into a nightmare by someone else's OC.
Tags:
- Liyang Yoon by Liyang Yoon
- Red Mercer by Red Mercer
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[div align="center"][font face="verdana"][font color="1979e6"]Suta[/font] [font color="42b41d"]Onawa[/font][/font][/div]
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[/font][/quote][/blockquote]BAD
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[div align="center"][font face="verdana"][b][font color="a62323"]'Suta'[/font][/b] [b][font color="580808"]'Onawa'[/font][/b][/font][/div][font color="333333"][div align="center"][font face="impact"][font size="5"]A DAY OF LABOR[/font][/font][/div]
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[li][font color="333333"]I'm walking[/font][/li]
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[/font][/quote][/blockquote]BOTH
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[div align="center"][font face="verdana"][b][font color="1979e6"]'Suta'[/font][/b] [b][font color="580808"]'Onawa'[/font][/b][/font][/div][font color="333333"][div align="center"][font face="impact"][font size="5"]A DAY OF LABOR[/font][/font][/div]
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